Comments : My Tresures

  • 11 years ago

    by john graver

    What else can I say but beautiful and sad at the same time.

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww. That was a very beautiful poem to read. =] Made me smile. I can definately tell they mean an awfully lot to you! You're got talent, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 11 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Sounds like there is much love to share amongst your family. I loved this poem. It definetly made me laugh and smile, I think that if you can make people smile through writing a poem, You definetly have a spark, a talent in your writing.
    xxBonnie

  • 11 years ago

    by Jeff

    Wow. This is a definite piece of work. This is something I'd engrave in stone, or something along the sorts.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridget

    This is the first poem of yours i've read so far and its such a nice poem! your so talented I'm going to definitely read the rest of your poems!! :D

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Aw that was so beautiful i really liked this poem. very beautifully written. great job on it =) xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    Ahem...a lil bit of correction here...Now it is four lil treasures...i believe...

    Awesome poem...really touching... makes me realize how important family is.

  • 11 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    Ahem...a lil bit of correction here...Now it is four lil treasures...i believe...

    Awesome poem...really touching... makes me realize how important family is.

  • 10 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    I really like this poem. It flows very well, maybe except the last line. If you made it a little shorter, it would have been perfect. Despite that, though, you put a lot of feeling into it.

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by dandy

    This is a beautiful poem. I commend your courage. Yous ond like a very brave woman. WIsh I could get the hang of it. Thank you for your comment!

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful sentiments Cindy. Thay are indeed treasures!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful tribute to your grandchildren

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I assure you, they surely will rem you forever....coz for them you are the only treasure... :o)
    great write indeed, very emotional

    all the best and take care of urself

  • 10 years ago

    by katie ( Milo 1)

    Awesome poem. great words. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Carrie

    This poem is so adorable!

    thanks very much for your comment!

  • 10 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Hello,
    thank you so much for commenting on my poem. It means so much to me. That was a hard poem to write...kept crying...lol Well, anyway thank you so much! Also you are really very good! amazing work
    Burning~Wing

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    How sweet, I'm glad something brings you joy in life! Keep up the good work, 5/5!! And thanx for the comments on my poems!
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 10 years ago

    by Corinne

    Again, very moving, told simply yet beautifully.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is great! i can tell your grandbabies mean alot 2 u!! its wonderful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Of all your work i've read this piece is sure to be the best! you did a terrific job on this one, i could almost see three little blonde girl bouncing on they're granny's knee! wow

    Narc xxx