I've not seen a poem on this kind of subject before.
This has a strong hidden message in it about the way kids might turn out to be how they are. But that just might be the way i'm reading it.
You kept up a brilliant flow throughout.
Oh my goodness! [Hugs you] This almost made me cry. However, I'm very upset right now, but this stole my heart.
It was as an 8 year old child were reading this poem to me. It was perfect. So sad.. I just, love it. I'm speechless. Great job.
That was one of the saddest poems that I have ever read. I have never seen this type of poem done about Christmas and I have to say that you did a very good job with it.
Good flow and great job of filling the poem with emotions! Keep it up! 5/5
Ohh God. That was awesome. I loved the way you changed the last line a little, it closes the poem. The flow might have not been perfect, but that's totally dismissed due to the fact that it's so touching.