Comments : Santa, I love you

  • 10 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    I've never stopped believing ... there's a bit of Santa in everyone I know!

    Luv the slight change in the fourth line of the first and last stanza. Really sets the poem. I'll check out a few more now.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    I've not seen a poem on this kind of subject before.
    This has a strong hidden message in it about the way kids might turn out to be how they are. But that just might be the way i'm reading it.
    You kept up a brilliant flow throughout.
    Excellent poem.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my goodness! [Hugs you] This almost made me cry. However, I'm very upset right now, but this stole my heart.
    It was as an 8 year old child were reading this poem to me. It was perfect. So sad.. I just, love it. I'm speechless. Great job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by yaya

    LOVE IT!

  • 10 years ago

    by lisa

    Absoulutely fantastic!!! and straight from the heart .very well done .

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww. That is sooo sad. I'm terribly sorry that happend to you.
    I really hope you have a wonderful Christmas this year! God Bless you!
    5/5

    ~*Tay*~

  • 10 years ago

    by john graver

    Very powerful write. great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was so touching yet so very sad! It brought tears to my eyes. Christmas can be a very hard time for many! Excellent write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    *Tears*
    That was one of the saddest poems that I have ever read. I have never seen this type of poem done about Christmas and I have to say that you did a very good job with it.
    Good flow and great job of filling the poem with emotions! Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very well done....perfect flow....perfect rhyme. A very sad look at the holiday.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...this has tears in my eyes.
    I thought this was really sad, but a pleasure to read.
    The imagery and wording you used really captured me.

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow that is an amazing poem.

    and really sad too; i hope its not true...

  • 10 years ago

    by Daniel Rutter

    Awesome poem, I really can feel the emotion in it.
    5/5....and have the happiest Christmas you can possibly have :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Meghan

    Santa clause isnt real he's he devil have you not ever noticed
    SAiNT NiCHOLAS [[ exactly ]]

  • 10 years ago

    by Lutu

    So amazing poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    Ohh God. That was awesome. I loved the way you changed the last line a little, it closes the poem. The flow might have not been perfect, but that's totally dismissed due to the fact that it's so touching.

    5/5