Oh. Joe, I hope this isn't for who I think it is??! This is so sad...it made me sad. The day after Christmas is gonna be exactly ONE month that I lost my granma. And yeah. This is just sad. It made me think of her. I've never had a Christmas without her...and I'm not even looking forward this Christmas tomorrow. Anyways, my bad for babbling...Lol. This was an excellent, heartfelt poem. Keep writing. And stay strong! God bless...
AHH this is way too sad.. very clever.. i like this a lot...a very enjoyable read.. my only suggestion is to unrhyme the first stanza because its not a rhyming poem.. however.. the first stanza is so it gives the impression that the rest will be as well.. still a realy great poem i liked it a lot
Beautiful emotional tribute.
I sometimes feel uncomfortable about thinking of family members during the christmas period. It just reminds you so hard that they are just not there anymore to share the laughter and joys that christmas brings.
Sorry i just had to drag about a thought this write gave me.
Excellent poem, i truely loved this one as well.
The sadness just drips of it, beautiful.