Comments : Christmas In Heaven

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem here, thank you for sharing ur great talent. keep up the great work like always. 5/5 from me.

  • 10 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    That was really sweet and sad too. The holidays can get depressing at times. Keep em coming

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a beautiful poem. Christmas is a hard tiime for many people. This helps to know they are in heaven watching and their love lives on in our hearts. Wonderful job!

  • 10 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is really good, I liked the flow of it and the last stanza was great. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    That like totally moved me. im about to tear. i loved that. its beautiful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow..
    The last stanza brought tears to my eyes.
    I really enjoyed this, it was beautifully written and filled with emotion.
    I loved the imagery used, it was fantastic.
    A wonderful piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by megann anne

    AMAZING! keep it up~

    **Megan**

  • 10 years ago

    by mz BrokenHearted B i t c h

    AWE!! i love the poem Its great! Keeep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Oh. Joe, I hope this isn't for who I think it is??! This is so sad...it made me sad. The day after Christmas is gonna be exactly ONE month that I lost my granma. And yeah. This is just sad. It made me think of her. I've never had a Christmas without her...and I'm not even looking forward this Christmas tomorrow. Anyways, my bad for babbling...Lol. This was an excellent, heartfelt poem. Keep writing. And stay strong! God bless...

    `Poetess

  • 10 years ago

    by Dina

    Hey,
    pretty nice poem,i like it.u definetly deserve a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    Nice, Italian. Remember me? It's tina. read my poems and let me know what u think... thx!

  • 10 years ago

    by NOTHINGBUTALIE

    Hey! Merry Christmas

  • 10 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Excellent, you put such a good flow to it. Your poetry it touchy, and you can go far with it. Never give up.
    ---Ashley

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    That was such a good poem! It was so sad and I loved the story line.

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    AHH this is way too sad.. very clever.. i like this a lot...a very enjoyable read.. my only suggestion is to unrhyme the first stanza because its not a rhyming poem.. however.. the first stanza is so it gives the impression that the rest will be as well.. still a realy great poem i liked it a lot

  • 10 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    I loved the flow of that poem, I especially liked th topic of your poem. 5/5 x 5

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex

    Very sad but beautiful....

    ~*Alex*~

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Ok so i cryed, it sounds like you were writting about my grandma that just passed, a great poem, very touching write,
    nessa

  • 10 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    Beautiful emotional tribute.
    I sometimes feel uncomfortable about thinking of family members during the christmas period. It just reminds you so hard that they are just not there anymore to share the laughter and joys that christmas brings.
    Sorry i just had to drag about a thought this write gave me.
    Excellent poem, i truely loved this one as well.
    The sadness just drips of it, beautiful.

    5/5

    xo angelique