I love this...it was so moving and resulted with thought provoking questions for me.
The flow was great throughout, the ending was perfect, it carried so much meaning.
You did a really great job with this one.
Another great read. I have nothing to say that would need to be done to this one either. It's sad about how selfish people are for political and money gain. We shouldn't be acting like this. Animals are better in that aspect, I do believe. Do keep up the good work, though.
I agree with Twisted Heart, althought the flow was off in places, the message definetly makes up for it.
There are people who are less fortunate than us everyday, I think more people think about it around the holidays..when I was in college, we sent care packages to some of the soldiers in Iraq around Christmas time. Even though it only helped one platoon, if everyone did a little, it would add up to a lot! Great message in this one!