Comments : Think of Them on Christmas

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    This is true for many. I had a loved one serving over in Iraq . He died ... And I almost lost another this year . Almost . But him coming back was the greatest gift that 'Santa' could give me .
    Thank you for writing this poem(: Some don`t realize those that are risking their lives in war for us . This was beautifully written .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by awww

    I love the message of the poem... and for that i give it a 5/5! the flow was some-what off... but then it doesnt really matter... the deeper meaning took hold of me and i kept reading and reading... very nice poem... it reaches out to the readers...

    ~angel~

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan Raff

    Sometimes, the rhyming scheme of a poem isn't as critical as the deeper meaning behind a poem, nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Although the flow was off in a few places, the sentiment behind the poem more than made up for it.

    We do need to think of the ones who are unable to celebrate in the traditional way and hope that they find some comfort at Christmas time. I do so weep for those who have a hard time finding a reason to celebrate. May our prayers go out to them.

    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! this is a great poem!!! i love it. it has alot of meaning to it.. i used to think about all the gifts when i was younger too. but now as im older i just think about what christmas is really about...5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by bon

    Sorry to say but the flow wasn't that great but i do like yor message of the peice. It's sad but apparently true.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a excellent poem and one that should be shared with many. Excellent work on this.

  • 10 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Bravo! This one was amazing. The flow, the emotion, the heart... BRILLIANT PIECE. You have talent. Good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Flow was great.
    The emotion was great.
    And the topic was touching.
    =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that gave me goosebumps, i loved it really great, makes you definitely think. beautiful poem for yet a still great poet. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Oscar

    I love this poem. it is so true, there are many children out there who don't really get anything for Christmas and hardly any other day.

    good poem, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This poem had a twist i never thought, you brought it in a whole new direction. great work :) this poems format was well done. it made me think.. good job :)

    -/2 Terra

  • 10 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww, this was really sad. It upsets me that there are soldiers, and innocent people dying on CHRISTMAS. You really captured this concept in your poem, great work.

    --Steph

  • 10 years ago

    by Rona

    Wow! Another well-written poem! I loved the message. You reminded me how grateful we all should be for those soldiers at war. Thank you for that!
    Great job!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. your an amazing writer.. this poem is soo good.. again it has great flow.. and i never really thougth about others on christmass.. i feel so selfish lol.. nice job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I agree with Twisted Heart, althought the flow was off in places, the message definetly makes up for it.

    There are people who are less fortunate than us everyday, I think more people think about it around the holidays..when I was in college, we sent care packages to some of the soldiers in Iraq around Christmas time. Even though it only helped one platoon, if everyone did a little, it would add up to a lot! Great message in this one!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Another great read. I have nothing to say that would need to be done to this one either. It's sad about how selfish people are for political and money gain. We shouldn't be acting like this. Animals are better in that aspect, I do believe. Do keep up the good work, though.

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    The happiness is real in here, yet there is a hint of hate in it, of politics too.

    the wording was amazing, keep writing.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...it was so moving and resulted with thought provoking questions for me.
    The flow was great throughout, the ending was perfect, it carried so much meaning.
    You did a really great job with this one.