A Date With Death

by Brittany   Dec 24, 2006


Day faded into night as I lay upon my bed.
Bitter thoughts of suicide running through my head.
I thought that I'd been beaten I couldn't take it anymore.
Then my thoughts were interrupted
by a knock outside my door.
I opened up my eyes and saw a figure dressed in black.
He smiled at me kindly as he pushed his dark hood back.
He said, "Hello my darling, sorry I am late.
I know that it's short notice, but I think we have a date."
I told him, "I've been waiting, I've dreamt of you before.
And here you are knocking, upon my bedroom door."
He said, "I hate surprises. A single knock will do.
But forget that for a moment. Tell me about you."
I told him of my sorrow. I spoke about my tears.
I talked about my misery, and whispered all my fears.
He took me in his arms and said, "Darling just forget.
There's no need to remember now. Nothing to regret."
I knew my life was slipping. I was taking my last breath.
And with it I spoke four small words: "Thanks for coming Death."

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  • 10 years ago

    by UtterlyAlive

    I love this poem, you left it simple, yet with stunning imagery. It's a creative twist on suicide poems, I honestly was a little worried about you trying to hard when I first decided to read it, but those thoughts dissapeared. It's amazing
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by King of Pain

    You have so much emotion in your writing is really pulls at my heart. I love your work and all your poems. This is one of your best.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shyguy

    Wow
    what an excellent poem and nice rhyming too
    you know you deserve 10/5 vote for that
    and also thanks you adding me as your favourite

  • That was very good, when I first started reading I thought it was going to be one of those "oh i wanna die" stories but your is very good 5/5

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