That was very good, when I first started reading I thought it was going to be one of those "oh i wanna die" stories but your is very good 5/5

Wow
what an excellent poem and nice rhyming too
you know you deserve 10/5 vote for that
and also thanks you adding me as your favourite

You have so much emotion in your writing is really pulls at my heart. I love your work and all your poems. This is one of your best.

I love this poem, you left it simple, yet with stunning imagery. It's a creative twist on suicide poems, I honestly was a little worried about you trying to hard when I first decided to read it, but those thoughts dissapeared. It's amazing
5/5