You make quite a few well taken points here. Good job!

Some people want the best,maybe-but thats only human.Sometimes they don't believe they deserve to get what they want.Why avoid humiliation?thats pretty good advice,but people should stand up for what's right,and/or what they believe in,and sometimes that involoves getting humiliated.I loved the part about not being afraid of you individuality....perfect advice.pretty good poem