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by áƒ¦theáƒ¦crunkáƒ¦pirateáƒ¦ Dec 28, 2006
Life, society /
Part of me is gone
wandering through foreign places i will never see
dreaming of things that i can never be
it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill
i sit and wait
this part will return
i will be complete
Lovely poem mate. 5/5 deffinately. i wouldn't change a thing :)
I love the fact that you did use a "normal" word pattern! I LOVED THE FORM! :)
"it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill"
I can relate to this couplet and i'm sure a lot of people on this site can too.
I love the structure of this poem