Comments : The GOLD now goes to ME

  • 11 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    Wow fantastic poem, cant wait to read more of your work 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow, i loved this one, i could really feel the characters angst. it was great

    much love and many kisses,

  • 11 years ago

    by azii

    Great poem!
    I liked it a lot...
    Keep up the good work
    & Take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    I am glad after seeing your discussions several times that I finally compelled to read some of your work.
    This piece was very nice. I enjoyed it and am glad the door was opened to allow me to read it. Great job and very expressive in relaying the message you were trying to get across.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow glad to be one of few who commented on this poem

    glad to see someone whos strong
    amazing job

    brittany (MD)

  • 11 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    another great poem, however i dont like this one as much as i like your other poems, i dont really know why, but its still worth a 5/5 dont worry,
    the flow was great
    kisses stephanie

  • 11 years ago


    Nice poem.... very well written keep up the great work!!

  • I love this poem keep writing, i love to read your work. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    The rythm scheme was off abit but the message was right in your face. I liked how you boldly expressed your distain for the other person it was well writen in that manner. All and all it was good I would have rythmed it abit more to keep the flow going but it was a good read. ok this is the 5th poem and now I will e-mail you with my over view hope you can take it. Plot121

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this...very moving and intense, flow was good for the most part but there were times when I thought it was a little off.
    Again, I loved the ending, it hits the reader hard.
    I thought this was beautifully written, it really tugs on ther reader's heart.