Comments : The GOLD now goes to ME

  • 10 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    Wow fantastic poem, cant wait to read more of your work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow, i loved this one, i could really feel the characters angst. it was great

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 10 years ago

    by azii

    Great poem!
    I liked it a lot...
    Keep up the good work
    & Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    I am glad after seeing your discussions several times that I finally compelled to read some of your work.
    This piece was very nice. I enjoyed it and am glad the door was opened to allow me to read it. Great job and very expressive in relaying the message you were trying to get across.
    Dixie

  • 10 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow glad to be one of few who commented on this poem

    glad to see someone whos strong
    amazing job

    brittany (MD)

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    another great poem, however i dont like this one as much as i like your other poems, i dont really know why, but its still worth a 5/5 dont worry,
    the flow was great
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Nice poem.... very well written keep up the great work!!

  • I love this poem keep writing, i love to read your work. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    The rythm scheme was off abit but the message was right in your face. I liked how you boldly expressed your distain for the other person it was well writen in that manner. All and all it was good I would have rythmed it abit more to keep the flow going but it was a good read. ok this is the 5th poem and now I will e-mail you with my over view hope you can take it. Plot121

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this...very moving and intense, flow was good for the most part but there were times when I thought it was a little off.
    Again, I loved the ending, it hits the reader hard.
    I thought this was beautifully written, it really tugs on ther reader's heart.