Okay, so it was very well done, good flow and rhyme and parts were funny, but the ending itself didnt' make me laugh. The part about dominos and the line about something good and something cheap was well done! So overall good job!
Charisma*
P.S. Who in their right mind voted a 1 that's retarded. I'll up it for ya!

Jonny i LOVED IT!!!!!!! hahaha it was great and who cares what everyone else says it only matters what I think ttyl
5/5 always
Kate~

Party on pizza style. chicken barbeque ranch all the way