Comments : 4 Short Poems of Spring

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    These are all beautiful. I can close my eyes and see what you are seeing. Excellent job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Yu Lee

    I really like this one. ^-^

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Awesome!!! That's the only way to describe these verses! I love every word.....sooo beautiful it brings a tear!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by robin milford

    These r beautiful they belong together.
    Thanks for your comment on "Dear God Thank You"

  • 11 years ago

    by Kim

    Another wonderful depiction of beauty Corinne! I especially loved the third poem :) Super splendid!

  • 9 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Wow... amazing.... i like these poems. no bet 5/5 for it

    (Who would think
    That I would write
    So simply, not trying
    To be profound
    Who would think
    That I could sing
    Sing without making
    A solitary sound)

    love these lines. i had a good read. i enjoy it
    it's beautiful.
    u really painted spring with ur words..
    once again i love ur poem.
    i'll take this to my fav list. =)

  • 9 years ago

    by sneha

    I can put petals in my pocket, my love
    And later, place them in your palm
    But it's not the same
    As walking through the garden
    With you, linked arm in arm
    my fav lines.I enjoyed all the poems.excellent work.5

  • 8 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    I can see how inspired you are in writing such poems. All are adorable...Keep it up!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-