Comments : Family

  • 10 years ago

    by Tripp

    Families are not just connected by blood or birth
    for there are many others who are of worth.

    I especially agree with that line right there....it might just be my age, but right now I hold my friends closer to me than family. that line just seems to ring true to me in my heart.

    the rest of the poem was pretty good, and you kept up the rhyme scheme pretty well.

    keep it up, I'm keeping on eye on you

    Tripp

  • 10 years ago

    by Denysia

    Good job thnx for the comment on my poem by the way;.

  • 10 years ago

    by bianca

    Great job i loved it.
    Bianca.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    I like the way you have protrayed the closeness of family in your poem. Good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    Honestly, it was a good poem.
    But, I hated the rhyme.
    I've recently tried unrhyming poetry, and it rules.
    I think you could pull it off, because the rhyme seems forced, very forced in this poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Beautiful work! Its soo true... thats how families SHOULD be.

  • 9 years ago

    by Nelle

    That is adorable. Some people don't really understand what family is there for, and this tells is perfectly.

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    Amazing, again you are very creative writer and all of these poems you have wrote are very true, this one is very true. Family is amazing and no matter what like you said they will be there for you through thick and then and thats the best thing in the world.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.