Comments : Poetry

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I liked this, it's an interesting description. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Yes poetry is hard to define. I think to each person it means something diffrent. I like this write of yours. Good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem Thanks for your comment on "B.i.t.c.h.s be haten"

  • 11 years ago

    by azii

    Hey... Thanks for the comment.. :)

    This one is very good. I like it..
    Good job

    Keep on writing

    Take care

  • 11 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    So true 5/5 and so beautifully written


  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Good poem, greatly written.
    My favorite stanza is:
    The right brain sings
    Its mystical tune
    A secret rune
    The soul's pure voice-

    I like the form of this poem, and the choice of words in it.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow!!! Beautiful poem, you created wonderful atmosphere and described poetry on fantastic way. Well done, I love it.

  • 11 years ago


    This is great... a short and meaningful poem...

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow Corrine this poem really impressed me.
    I like the descriptive metaphors and imagery.
    Even tho this was a shorter peice it evoked many emotions about how I fel about writing and also was very thought provoking. The rhymes scheme was original and I LOVED the topic!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    You describe it very well, a brief journey....That is what it is to me also, like a momentary escape.Your work is excellent Corinne.

  • 5 years ago

    by Liam

    I think it's direct, simple, and nice. My favorite stanza is the last one, because it captures my feelings about poetry. What's so romantically fascinating about poetry and art in general is the ambiguity of it all. That last stanza plainly describes why I value art over science, over politics; it comes the closest to satisfying the mysteries of life because it doesn't make explicit assertions or look for exact truths where there are only uncertainties. It accepts the vague quality of life from the human perspective at face value. But I suppose the vagueness itself is a consequence of our limited perspective. Anyways, great poem, I give it a 4/5 simply because I feel the rating system on this website isn't used appropriately by the users and thus it fails to accurately rate the quality and emotion of a work. That being said, the more mechanical-esque categories/systems of criteria that are imposed on art, the less unique the viewers reading list becomes. It kind of defeats what I felt you were trying to convey in the last stanza because it attempts to define the undefinable.