Comments : A New Perspective

  • 10 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    This is beautifully written. It really is "a new perspective" or maybe just a poetic twist on one that isn't easily recognized. Either way, I thought it was fantastic.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Nicely Written work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This is brilliant!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Fluffy

    "Time And Matter are all so important,
    Imagination doesn't have a purpose,
    Dark times still come to pass,
    Faithful moments don't seem to last,"

    ^Wisely written, my friend. A profound piece, with a message so very significant. And you're right, imagination really has no purpose; but it's really the only thing that keeps us sane in this world! Great use of poetic technique, you pen this piece well and your wording helps create an emotive atmosphere.

    Well done :)

    -Ely.

  • 10 years ago

    by natalie

    I love ur poems eric.... !!
    i feel like shytt wen i read them im thinking my poems are nuthing compared to urs..! ouchh

  • 10 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    Hi! thanks for your comment on my poem. I really like your poem as well. 5/5.

    ~K3!$3Y~

  • 10 years ago

    by Jeremy B

    A new perspective on a life that one doesnt desire to look back upon...aint that the truth fa us all

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so beautiful!
    Wonderfully written.

  • 10 years ago

    by Briana

    That was...wow.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job! Really makes you stop and think.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Ooooo lol, I loved this one too. This is again so powerful and meaningful. I love your stuff. I'm adding you to my favorites so I can see what's next. :]
    5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina

    I love the big words you used in this. it was really good. it flowed nicely. i dont really see anything wrong with it. keep writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    This is beautiful. Very nicely done. Great message to it and very well use of words. Thanks for the comment. God bless 5/5

    <3Tayyy

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow. 5/5 definately. I loved this poem, because it has great feeling. It kind of describes where I am in life right about now. So, good job and keep working on these great poems!

  • 10 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow i loved the ending!!!
    Don't extinguish the candle,
    Cause it's so hard to light again,
    perfection

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really meaningful,i liked this like a quote

    Light the candle to start a new life

    Wow
    Keep on writing honey
    See ya
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem made me really think. I love though provoking poems, great job. keep writing! 5/5

  • Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. It has such deep words in it. It's very well-written. The flow was great and the image in it was very good. Great job! I loved it!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 9 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "Let's give in,
    And not think of our actions,
    Let's give in,
    And not think of the outcome"
    ^ For me, these 4 lines were the best in the entire poem - but I think this is because I can probably relate to them the most.

    I'll be honest, I do like this poem better than your other one though. :) But they're both still amazing poems. The flow was perfect, and your word choice was incredible.

    A meaningful write. Overall: 5.5
    - Steph.