Comments : Trickle

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    I really enjoyed reading this. You used great imagery with such simple words. I had a nice rhythem going whilst reading this poem, nice style. The last stanza is a really good ending for this. Links your emotions and the rest of the story together nicely. =] Great poem. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This was so effective, your imagery was outstanding, this poem was dark n meaningful, you have talent.