Great job!! it kinda reminds me of what my ex said, that he lost me and wished he had me back...

*the fear of love overpowered
me*

That's my favorite line, it just like popped out at me like BAM!!! anyways, ur an amazing writer, keep it up!

Forever*Yours

Wow! I like this! I'm sure this will be a great song! Just one small error I found: "*To* (too) bad I have lost ". Hehe! Well, overall I like this poem. I thought it was deep and I could relate! Great job!
5/5

This is really good, also know how it feels, 5/5. ur emotions are showed so clearly and so is the situation...well done, keep writing

Awesume! i luved it.

That was very sweet, so innocent! :)

good work 5/5

Really a nice job... even though there was no rhyme scheme or anything, it was a really good poem, it was just like your emotions pouring out, nice job 5/5

This was very good just watch your gramar a litle, but still you get 5/5 cuz i dont rly care about gramar =D

Wow!!!! that was great! U r really a great poet. Keep it up...and can u read some of my poems sometimes? jw
~LJ

Very nicely written. I agree with MY1&only, looks like lyrics to a song. The flow was really good, keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

Wow it's really fine,keep it up,well done 5/5

Aww..well this poem is very interesting, it had a good flow to it...but anywayz an awsomers poem!

Wowie!great poem! i loved the detailing and emotion you used! excellent work! 5/5

Good job on your poem. Isn't it funny what love does. Take Care Cindy

I really like this poem,x

I liked how u described the feeling!! great poem!!!
~*((Katherine))*~

Oh my god, great poem, so much feeling in this..hows it goin huney?

So i guess these are lyrics? it's amazing! it would defiantly make a great song! excellent job on writing them! 5/5

~Kristina