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Wow. This was really good. It flowed well. & Had very beautiful imagery. It was sad. yet amazingly penned. Your word choice was fabulous!
Amazing job, dear. Keep it up
by UnToLd TrUtH
This is a very touching and spirtiual poem in my point of veiw. Very good though 5/5
by Sandra D
This is my favorite poem of yours, it's amazing!!! i love how you wrote it, and the words you used, and it flowed so well. you're an amazing writer, i can't wait for you to write more poems!!!
I didn't understand this quite myself, but it could just be me.
This is awsome dude, love the wording, paints alot of pictures for the reader, 5/5!!! leep it up!!!
by Tara Kay
I actually like the last word "Tranquility", it made the poem finish well.
keep it up
Wow you really are a unique and excellent writer! great flow and great idea again wonderful job 5/5