Comments : Wake up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ohh very nice. Even though it's short, it has a great meaning and makes the reader think. Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Amazing write. Just the simplicity of the title and the irony of the first line in this poem makes it simply wonderful. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is a pretty amaing poem! it's got so much meaning, i love it!!
    My favorite part was this,
    "Explore unknown effects, play
    notes you haven't touched."
    that really got to me, im probably going to be thinking about that line for a while... great job!!!

    Forever*Yours

  • 10 years ago

    by Synh

    You have a real talent. Truly exceptional. Very few people have the gift of saying so much in such a short amount of time. You've truly been blessed. *5/5*

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is a wonderful write. So much powerful in so few words. i loved it.
    5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I'm not really sure i can decipher this poem. It seems like it holds some important meaning, but this, i think, belongs as a quote.
    4/5
    ~Stephen White
    ♥