I like this whole short, but to the point thing you got goin on. it's amazing that you can do that in so little words... anyways, i like this poem, i don't know exactly what, but something about it is... i don't know how to describe it, but it's a good thing!
Hehe. Short, sweet, and to the point, huh? New but original. I enjoyed it very much. You were able to say so much within but a few words. I feel bad because I want to say more but I truly dont what to say. This is a real piece of art. *5/5*
I really do like how you write, it's all simple, short but it has a very powerful meaning. I don't know what you intended this to mean, but to me it was about avoiding something because it feels safer and is easier, which is rather a cool message.
Keep it up.
I really like the way you write and the way you think. i mean from what i can see in your poems. but i think that its a little sketchy you need to take time and read them to yourself and maybe if you did that then they'd turn out better.