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  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Interesting indeed. short but nice and it gets the point across. 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 11 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Short and to the point, but I like it!!! Thank you for the comment on my poem, consturctive critism is always welcome!! 5/5
    Much Love,

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Short, but to the point. Very nicely done. Most short poems I read are ..ehh.. but this was good.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow, very simple yet full of pouring emotion. Amazing write! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Its nice to see you back dearest

    I liked this
    short and sweet,

    I'll read the rest soon I promise

  • 11 years ago

    by Allis MT

    Very deep, I understtod half, but i'll think about this for a few more days.
    thanks for the comment :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I like this whole short, but to the point thing you got goin on. it's amazing that you can do that in so little words... anyways, i like this poem, i don't know exactly what, but something about it is... i don't know how to describe it, but it's a good thing!


  • 11 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Like i said before, the way u write is different but different is good, i like this one too, 5/5!!! keep on writing like this, its cool!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Synh

    Hehe. Short, sweet, and to the point, huh? New but original. I enjoyed it very much. You were able to say so much within but a few words. I feel bad because I want to say more but I truly dont what to say. This is a real piece of art. *5/5*

  • 11 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I really do like how you write, it's all simple, short but it has a very powerful meaning. I don't know what you intended this to mean, but to me it was about avoiding something because it feels safer and is easier, which is rather a cool message.
    Keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marjan

    This was really interesting for me!
    just wanted to thank you for sharing this with us! thanks! :)


  • 11 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I really like the way you write and the way you think. i mean from what i can see in your poems. but i think that its a little sketchy you need to take time and read them to yourself and maybe if you did that then they'd turn out better.

  • 10 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Minimal effort - no risk

    much truth to that