Comments : Lost In The Night

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's strange that when something we cherish so much is gone or lost we tend to blame ourselves, when most of the times it is not our fault at all. Amazing job 5/5 great flow also

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is another good poem cindy, i loved the closing stanza, i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the good work!!! and have a good weekend!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    "Tonight when I lay down to sleep
    I'll pray to the Lord above
    That you know how much I cared
    And you'll somehow feel my love."

    I can relate to this poem in so many ways Cindy
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Another great one.
    You are one talented writer.

  • 10 years ago

    by john graver

    I know how your feeling I see your pain. You will find happiness in your life. Remember how many people love you.

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very pretty but sad Cindy. Hope you soon feel better. Very good flow and rhyme on this one. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Woah. I've been trying to write something like this for such a long time. I feel exactly like this. And...I don't know if this was meant to...but it made me cry. =/ Amazing write. I loved it. 5/5

    -` Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by dora

    Hey a very touching poem. xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This poem is sad but beautiful. your words are so powerful, i kept captured by your emotions.
    much love, Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Another 5....is there anything else
    beyond 5?

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
    ^_^

    ~Sablehuskey~

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write. everything fell into place nicely. beautiful and sad.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

    Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotions. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is simply outstanding, so much of passion & words which could be felt right from heart...lovely write

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    I really like your last line here, beautiful poetry.

  • 10 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Love the poem...i really liked it cindy keep on doing the great work

  • 10 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Pretty deep poem... :( I'm sorry. I know how it feels... =( 5/5

    D_P

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Just...beautiful.
    The last stanza hit me hard, I thought it had huge impact.
    This...is perfect.

  • 10 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Another great poem Hun.. this one could even be considered a lost love poem.. its beautiful.. yet so full of sorrow and longing