Comments : You never gave up

  • 10 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is really good. i have a suggestion for you though,maybe writing it in poem form? but juss a suggestion.you are an amazing writer!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sabrina Hunter

    I really enjoyed your poem. Like Curry said maybe put it in a poem form. If that's the way you like your poems to be, then keep them that way. Keep writing. Your really good.

  • 10 years ago

    by Laura Gillespie

    Awe sweetheart...i have a friend like that.
    i mean she gave up all faith on me but somehow i keep on believing that she'll come back and be my friend again..and well i mean she hasnt thanked me for it, but i mean i told her she means the world as my friend but i dont think she beleives sorta hurts me a little more than i wanted it too be.! but we're trying to become friends again just hope she doesnt drop me!!!

    love always
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by nirvana

    Thanks for reading my poems this poem is great too!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristin

    I like it alot i feel the same was with some of my closest friends.

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Very much a trueful poem...i felt it was real.

  • 10 years ago

    by sherry

    I love this poem! 5/5 i love it! my favorite!

  • 10 years ago

    by Promy

    Wow. this is awesome. i wish I had someone like that to stick by me through everything. My friends tend to be there and then leave. 5/5 from me! and thanks for ur vote and comment as well! it meant a lot!
    ~Promy

  • 10 years ago

    by missbrowneyes

    I really like this poem it kinda reminds me of how i felt with my parents keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by BlAcK ShAdOw

    Awww that was sweet i have a bestfriend also i wrote a poem about and she was always there for me n im glad she never gave up on me.But nice poem keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by ann burke

    YOUR POEM IS GOOD
    BUT JUST TAKE CARE THAT YOU
    DONT REPEAT THE SAME WORDS
    TO MANY TIMES IN THE ONE POEM

  • 10 years ago

    by Alvaro

    This got to me, "I abused your trust, I pushed you away but you never gave up and you never gave in. I pained you and told you to go away, but you were still there to the very end."

    how i abuse her 2.... but now im glad i can see how shes really in back of me helping me up if i fall this poem was great thanks for helping me see...

  • 10 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    Nicely done, and am glad that you recognize her for what she is . a TRUE FRIEND. keep up the good work. and form doesnt matter when it is a writing from the heart. thankx for sharing Harry

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea

    That is really good... I like it allot keep writing.. and thanks for commenting my poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Wonderful Poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by That Crazy Guy Chris

    Ive never had a friend like that. It must be nice. and wow-you must have constant inspiration or something because you have all these poems .

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea

    This is a good poem.. i like it =D

  • 10 years ago

    by Shadows Of A Dying Angel

    Wow!This is so..real I luv it!It shows how to never give up on the ones you love.Keep writing!Your really good!^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by ...W/E

    Now thats true friendship good poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Kersten

    This is really good i loved it 5/5 all the way.....