Comments : Slit A Wrist

  • 10 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is sad and kinda happy all at once..you are a very talented writer...

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I really like this one, while i was reading it in my head it was rhyming in my head. i love it because its try. from my point of view anyways

  • 10 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wow this is wonderful. You did a really good job on this one. it had a great message to remind cutters not to cut too deep. I can relate to this. Very well written. 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    The extreme shortness of these verses make it have an excellent rhythm. Definitely easy to read and follow. Powerful meaning. I loved the slight twist at the end. For me, it's very easy to relate to. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, this was really good. I loved how you kept it simple yet it contained so much depth. There were a few awkward spots where the flow wasn't too good but overall it worked well. The descriptions were good and the emotion was clear. Nicely done 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    I liked how you showed a down fall and a rise from it .. and your poem is very blunt I love it though! good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I liked the ending.. very powerful if only everyone who was a self harmer would stop and get some help because they realised that their life was so precious. I liked how you repeated that one line at the beginning of every stanza it made it stand out and it was something that I dont see to often in poem that I read on here anymore. This poem is much better than I thought it would be I'm really glad it wasnt the typical cutting poem. nice write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Wow if anyone can make a poem so short and simple and makes it yet so powerful its you lol.. you have a really good creative side of you and I hope you never forget that.. good job and keep up the good work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Wow amzing poem i can relate to this ome much comment some of my poems plz

    kylle

  • 10 years ago

    by Sydney

    This one is good. Pretty emotional and well written. Short yet simple. Nice job :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was really good the word choice was simple yet powerful, the emtion was amzingly deep. and the flow was flawless. Perfectly penned, well written, excellent read 5/5 for you deserve nothing less

  • 10 years ago

    by Georgi

    I liked this.
    it was fast, and effective and really deep, made me think. its quick, just like a cut. which is brill cause thats what u were writing about.
    loved it.
    well done
    please comment my latest called "your subconsious choir" thanks chick :) take care, keep writing =]
    xoxox

  • 10 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    I liked this poem.It was short and right to the point.Great job.

    Kelsie

  • 10 years ago

    by locky

    Awesome poem 5/5
    i just dont know what to say other then its amazeing

  • 10 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Your poem brings back memories, and it made me look at my scars.... shame on you j/k

    i love your poem its a 5

  • 10 years ago

    by carla

    Wow! it's like i feel indentified with your poem. i know how it feels, it's just the life seems difficult sometimes, but in the end, you never have the courage to end it. Wow, your poem has make me think =P take a loo through my poems n_n

  • 10 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow! i loved this poem, it was well written , and had a great flow. i loved your stana
    '"Slit a wrist
    Watch it bleed
    It's all you want
    And all you need"i like the way the ending becomes more posistive, almost like a message to poeple that they can stop .. and its not always too lat! really well written

    xXx

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was a GREAT POEM

    it was very powerful
    and there was alot of emotion

    and it does bring back memories

    but i thought it was a well written poem

    a well deserved, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow a unique piece I have come through. The repitition is nice and having a lucid function. Simple but great 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    Great poem
    5/5