The extreme shortness of these verses make it have an excellent rhythm. Definitely easy to read and follow. Powerful meaning. I loved the slight twist at the end. For me, it's very easy to relate to. 5/5
Wow, this was really good. I loved how you kept it simple yet it contained so much depth. There were a few awkward spots where the flow wasn't too good but overall it worked well. The descriptions were good and the emotion was clear. Nicely done 5/5
I liked the ending.. very powerful if only everyone who was a self harmer would stop and get some help because they realised that their life was so precious. I liked how you repeated that one line at the beginning of every stanza it made it stand out and it was something that I dont see to often in poem that I read on here anymore. This poem is much better than I thought it would be I'm really glad it wasnt the typical cutting poem. nice write.
Wow if anyone can make a poem so short and simple and makes it yet so powerful its you lol.. you have a really good creative side of you and I hope you never forget that.. good job and keep up the good work 5/5
I liked this.
it was fast, and effective and really deep, made me think. its quick, just like a cut. which is brill cause thats what u were writing about.
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Wow! it's like i feel indentified with your poem. i know how it feels, it's just the life seems difficult sometimes, but in the end, you never have the courage to end it. Wow, your poem has make me think =P take a loo through my poems n_n
Wow! i loved this poem, it was well written , and had a great flow. i loved your stana
'"Slit a wrist
Watch it bleed
It's all you want
And all you need"i like the way the ending becomes more posistive, almost like a message to poeple that they can stop .. and its not always too lat! really well written