Joseph this is a really good poem. I like reading it. 5/5 kasia

This is a great poem, not many people can understand that a poem doesnt need to rhym or anything, its very meaningful and i think its perfect \o/!

Great poem!! very inspiring!! well done :P

I love this one its so true!

Hmm. This poem seemed a little scattered to me. The words were good, but I think you might need to tie them together a bit better. Also, I think you should maybe add more it was a little short, add some more metaphors perhaps? Just some things you might want to think about to make you poem better.

Cayce xx