Comments : A fools errand

  • 11 years ago

    by LovelyBones

    Cuteness!!! I loved it allot. This part was my favorite...Because iit had a really good flow ad your choice of words were really good...

    "So when Cupid aims his arrow,
    Let it choose cleverly my love,
    I would obtain this love for just a day,
    Maybe I am just a girl you get tired of,
    And I will let this love fly away like a dove."

  • 11 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    Power to us girls!!! Who cares that it's Valentine's Day...? I don't! I'm going to be "hanging" out with a friend of mine. He and I have history, and I wrote a french poem for him! Hopefully that will show him my feelings for him still! I'm going to say, "Go for him girl"! What have you got to lose? You don't have him right now, so all you have to gain is him!
    Good luck my dear..

  • 11 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    The reference to valentines day I think pulled it together and made you think more clearly on the topic. I've been in this situation before. i really enjoyed reading this one =)