Cool poem.. 5/5

comment some of mine too...

This poem gave my body a reaction, i my mind i could see what was happening, and it was like i was there watching in third person. great job describing it, i really like it. those who can place the reader inside are quite talented!

Beautiful poem. you are so amazing. i know i have said that a lot of times before, but you are truely great. keep it up!

O wow. I havent read a Dark Poem that was good as this. 1000/5. Amazing work! I really loved the 1st & 2nd stanza!! Great Work.

Awsome

An excellent poem. I really enjoyed the vocabulary you used. The description image created were great! I was quite simply hooked from the begining of this poem, again the words amazed me. It had a ogod steady flow throughtout the poem, which i personally find hard to do. I really like this stanza:

Your poison rigged hand,
Wrote your venomous plans,
As you trace the outline of my silhouette
In a white chalk,
So pure in contrast.

Love the vocabulary usage mentioned this before but ill menttion it again. Its just a really great poem which i love the vocabulary youve used in it. Keep writing and thanks for your comment! xx

Enjoyed reading this...

You say the begining of the valentines day poem i wrote was similiar to yours? I thought i remember'd hearin' something like that was'nt really sure if it was writen or what but if you let me see your poem and look at let me compare i'd be gladly to repost it with a new begining

Wow that was intense. I loved it! It made me feel so much 5/5

Wow, that was fantastic, i really enjoyed reading this. It has a great flow, and its very visual. You use words like "Your poison rigged hand,
Wrote your venomous plans," And it is nice because it is different. Your set of vocalbulary makes it fun and more interesting. It's great! keep it up.

~skittz

Wow...interesting poem..good job!

This poem was probably one of the best i've ever read! i cant tell what it was that touched me so much...whether it was the way you we able to express yourself, or the fact that i could relate to this a lot! maybe both, i guess? :p

awesome poem!

5/5!

:] <33

Your poison rigged hand,
Wrote your venomous plans
i Liked this line! its so kewl!
And the imagry of it was kinda hunting for me but it was still a great write!