That is an amazing poem.
i had to read it. look up half the words,, then read it again.. ..but it really was great. it flowed-oddly really well! it sucks-mind my lingo- that it has to be in explicit, other people may not read it.
11 years ago
by Edward D Zurovec
Wow, this is great , a lot of thought went into this poem.
dewy eyes of a dunderhead,
reveal the wanton breadth,
of my awry tete-a-tete.
Hmm..this is a very well spoken poem...and it has many words that show emotion all by themsleves, so all the words were so perfectly chosen that the poem couldnt possibly turn out bad:)>..very nice poem/.5/5
Wow, quite simply an excellent read! The word usage was amazing! And if im truthful i acctually went on dictionary.com and searched some of the meanings... But i loved the fact you made me go and search for them, it proves that your english is outstanding! And i honestly do love poems like this, one's that arent that obvious and you have to look deeper into what they mean. So this poem made me think. SO yeah your vocabulary was amazing. The flow was good, and i havnt read a poem in this style before so it was really unique and different to me. I really enjoyed it, thanks for your comment and keep writing! xx