Comments : Damask Rose

  • 10 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    That is an amazing poem.
    i had to read it. look up half the words,, then read it again.. ..but it really was great. it flowed-oddly really well! it sucks-mind my lingo- that it has to be in explicit, other people may not read it.

    xLauren

  • 10 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Wow, this is great , a lot of thought went into this poem.
    dewy eyes of a dunderhead,
    reveal the wanton breadth,
    of my awry tete-a-tete.
    Amazing write!5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Hmm..this is a very well spoken poem...and it has many words that show emotion all by themsleves, so all the words were so perfectly chosen that the poem couldnt possibly turn out bad:)>..very nice poem/.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow, quite simply an excellent read! The word usage was amazing! And if im truthful i acctually went on dictionary.com and searched some of the meanings... But i loved the fact you made me go and search for them, it proves that your english is outstanding! And i honestly do love poems like this, one's that arent that obvious and you have to look deeper into what they mean. So this poem made me think. SO yeah your vocabulary was amazing. The flow was good, and i havnt read a poem in this style before so it was really unique and different to me. I really enjoyed it, thanks for your comment and keep writing! xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Well, this is a very complex but perfectly worded poem, love the complexity of the word choice, i give it a 5/5!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by GIRL IN LOVE

    I really didn't like this poem. i don't even undersatnd it

  • 10 years ago

    by Crying_Angel

    What can I say? Amazing. Can see you took a lot of thought into this one OR you just a natural... Wish mines was good as yours :) 6/5

  • 10 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Not your best poem, but still great. It seems a little bit more forced.
    Still, you have a great vocabulary.
    4/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 10 years ago

    by umbra

    Is that a blush you bring to my cheek? I enjoy what the fact you create more than just an image, you create an atmosphere here.