Wow that was a good poem I really liked that you have talent and this poem came for your heart this is why I give you a 5.

Damn hun!! ur a dogg at writing..i like this one a lot!

Oh well done. i loved the first two stanza. they were awesome.

5/5 David

Wow this is really well written

Another great one Kia....And you're only 14?...Man I'm afraid how it's gonna be as you get even better....Ouch....Too bad I can only give it a 5, because it's a sure 10 without a doubt...To you I wish the best, and never, ever let the pen rest....Take care, and God bless....:)

Wowwwwwwwwww your poems are like
short stories, The kind that you can't
walk away from. The kind that are over
so fast. The kind that leave hanging wanting more. thats talent. You have the gift. 5/5
no doubt cy

I like this one a lot. 5/5.

Another great poem filled with emotion. 5/5

WOW. That was a deep write
I really loved the flow of this poem. Absolutely amazing. Also the emotion was wonderful.
Overall perfectly and beautifully written
5/5