Great poem.
I wish i was good like you lol.
5/5

Great job. and i totally agree with what you said.

For such a patriotic piece, it was good . When I read people trying to write poems about this kind of topic, they can`t work it, but you did a good job with it . If only other people could see it this way .
..__MiNDYY

I salute to you! kudos on a very fine poem! The flow was great and the rhyme scheme awsome! keep it up!You're on my fave!

-Liz-

Well done on a nicely written piece of poetry with a great meaning behind it. People dont usually pull this topic off well b ut u did. Well done~mel