Comments : The fight for independence

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Great poem.
    I wish i was good like you lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by amber

    Great job. and i totally agree with what you said.

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    For such a patriotic piece, it was good . When I read people trying to write poems about this kind of topic, they can`t work it, but you did a good job with it . If only other people could see it this way .

  • 11 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I salute to you! kudos on a very fine poem! The flow was great and the rhyme scheme awsome! keep it up!You're on my fave!


  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Well done on a nicely written piece of poetry with a great meaning behind it. People dont usually pull this topic off well b ut u did. Well done~mel