Comments : All that i need

  • 9 years ago

    by StandStill

    I love it!! it's nice to see that a love poem can bring in god. that you can love a man and a god forever and that they can coexist. amazing! <3

  • 9 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    I loved the poem and the message..here is my critique:
    I think you should change
    "It so much powerful when we met
    With u and God I am complete"
    to
    "It was so powerful when we met
    With you and God I am complete"
    It flows a little better in my opinion :)
    great poem tho, i gave it 5/5
    ~kayli

  • 9 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Beautiful poem!! It sounds like a younger me i used to write like this lol If u wanna read some of my old poems there kinda like this... Good Job i tell u love this guy alot ;) 5/5