Blissful Confusion

by Rahl The Layman Lord   Feb 28, 2007


My thoughts
A confused mass of chaos
Is there not reason to be happy
Is there not reason to hope
Why then
Why does my heart hurt
Why do I want now more than ever

Why when I see your round cheeks
Your full lips
Your jeweled eyes
Why when I close my eyes
And see what my eyes cant
Why when I sense your spirit
Taste your emotions
Feel your love
Why
Why am I not satisfied
Why wont I settle for less than all
Why cant I just have you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Great flow. I could relate alot. Very unique.
    I really enjoyed it alot; I'm going to have to say 5/5 for sure.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I love ur style its so maazing...keep ti up and plesae feel free to comment some of mine as well that would be greatly appreciated...keep up the great work

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Man, you are totes making mew swoon. lol great details and wording. On a scale of 1-10 this is like 11, but the highest is 5 so. lol Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    *your jewled eyes* thats wonderful imagery...nice jobb. and i love your style its so unique...nice jobb keep it up. 5/5

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is such a beautiful poem, 5/5
    gabriella

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