Great job!!! you did well with this one!
keep up the great work!
amanda

I really liked this one.
Again, it was a great opening and each stanza was better than the last.
The flow was flawless throughout, and the ending was beautiful.

Can you make me a poem,about what's going on whit my life now???? coz i can't put them into words how i feel about her!!! pls reply to me tnx...

Wow, all of your poems are great!
All full of emotion and the structire and flow is fantastic.
Really is what poetry is all about!!!!!!!!!
And this wasnt even about you-brilliant once again!!! 5/5
Aish

I love this. its awesome!!! great job you got talent