Comments : God gave me a son

  • 11 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is so sweet, and it really has a deep meaning, 5/5
    it flowed perfect, and was absolutely beautiful
    luv gabriella

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This was a really good poem.
    You did a good job in writing it.
    5/5

    ~chelsea

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    The repeating of god gave me a son really made this whole poem stronger. well done with use of special techniques.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    This poem is so lovely. the repetition is really powerful, but isn't irritating because the length of the poem is perfect. [ you don't often find a writer capable of doing that in my opinion ! ]
    i would say that you should change the last stanza, because you seem to have followed some sort of rhyming pattern and i was a little disappointed in the way you finished it, but the rest was really well written. good job.x

  • 11 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    I love it it was really moving

  • 11 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Awesome poem. good job.

    your servant:
    david

  • 11 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    What a beautiful poem Nessa! Not talking from experience, children are a doll to have! I have 6 younger siblings and two of them are 2 years old or younger. Little kids are beautiful!

    Ciao