This is so sweet, and it really has a deep meaning, 5/5
it flowed perfect, and was absolutely beautiful
luv gabriella

This was a really good poem.
You did a good job in writing it.
5/5

~chelsea

The repeating of god gave me a son really made this whole poem stronger. well done with use of special techniques.

5/5 David

This poem is so lovely. the repetition is really powerful, but isn't irritating because the length of the poem is perfect. [ you don't often find a writer capable of doing that in my opinion ! ]
i would say that you should change the last stanza, because you seem to have followed some sort of rhyming pattern and i was a little disappointed in the way you finished it, but the rest was really well written. good job.x

I love it it was really moving

Awesome poem. good job.

your servant:
david

What a beautiful poem Nessa! Not talking from experience, children are a doll to have! I have 6 younger siblings and two of them are 2 years old or younger. Little kids are beautiful!

Ciao