WOW this one I like very much, you show that you don't need no rhymscheme to write a poem, the words are enough to show. This is the greatest compliment I can give

This was very dark. but the topic was different. i liked the way you wrote it. showed how you felt very cleary.

5/5 David

I loved it i voted 5/5

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This is vivid, dark and twisted everything i love in a poem, well done!! you use such a good vocabulary and ur poetry is amazing, wow, i am in awe!!

This is vivid, dark and twisted everything i love in a poem, well done!! you use such a good vocabulary and ur poetry is amazing, wow, i am in awe!!

Crying my tears of vexatious sorrow
wishing that there could be no tomorrow,
the world would not be that fortuitous

**amazing imagery....wow** and i love your word choices, thingsl iek htis afre often cliched but you do a really good job avoiding it. one questions whats lusus naturae?? great stuff...5/5

melissa

Wow. lol i like it, i really like it

I love your poetry its amazing, i can tell you write so much from your heart

brittaqny (MD)

Wow...i love how i cant spell my own name right tis brittany *

One word [intense] Crazy intense. Like it.

I LOVE your perspective!!!!!!!!!!!!!