SOMETHING I SHOULD HOLD ONTO?

by N.Lee   Mar 29, 2007


This boy got me contemplating
thinking about "love" again...
when i just told myself
that i just wanted to have friends
it's funny how you hurt
just to have it good
but who's to say that liking someone
really should be understood
is this something that i should hold onto?
cause right now I'm not sure
but it's not love ...
its each others presence that we adore
i cant help how i feel
and who i feel for
he let's me know how he feels
shows that he wants something real
he shows me how it really should be
so his age don't matter to me
we have an understanding
we don't care about what people say
cause how he treats me
is a feeling that i want to stay
some may think its just a phase
"it'll be over in a day"
but we let each other know were here to stay...

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  • 16 years ago

    by pInKYbOO

    Liked ur poem... It was really good, It has a true meaning..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I gave it a four because the message you were trying to get across came across it's just some spelling errors mixed in with a few i's left uncapitaled ( you spelled treat without the r). But if all of it was capitalized and spelled right it would be fine. Now my question is were you just typing an unrhyming poem or were you trying to get it to rhyme in there because I saw some areas that were rhyming but then a lot of them weren't. I do that too with some of my poems but most people like them anyways. Well good luck off to the next poem to read!

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    Good poem. i really lyk it.
    ***ayshley***

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    I really liked this one ,brilliantly done ,well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by N.Lee

    THIS POEM IS A GREAT POEM.. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP GOINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! LOL :)

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