This poem has amazing rhythm and every single thought fits together so fluidly. I really enjoyed this. The rhyme is flawless, and really adds to the poem. I think lines 9-16 are my favorite. Great job.
Hi I was drawn in by your beautiful picture, hope that doesn't freak you out. Makes a change from seeing who's got the weirdess threads on the discussion board..... then check out their poems lol., I love the ending
"you fear the thing that, most of all,
you proudly thought you knew:
the presence of the black abyss
that hides itself in you."
Two years ago I stood on that cliff face and made a dicission to carry on, maybe the black abyss is just too scary after all.
People take what they want from others poems for me I your poem had extra meaning than most