Comments : Snipers Up

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    You really areamazing baby, you made me cry at school you punk, i love you, nessa

  • 10 years ago

    by Cj Barritt

    Wow, that was amazing nicely done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Unknown Soul

    Amazing poem...i really like it, i dont kno y but i feel guilty when i hear/talk abt the american soldiers in iraq, since iam iraqi myself....i hope u will go bak home safe...5/5

  • Wonderful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    A really nice poem, but i didn't really understand much of it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    This was a very well written poem and was very good. I enjoyed it especially towards the end. Keep up the good work and stay strong, 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Teria

    "To have and to hold and in her i do confide"
    [To have and to hold, in her I do confide]
    - And just drags the line out too much. It's better if you take it out and replace it with a comma. Gives it a lingering feeling instead of dragging it out.

    "all my heart,mind and soul"
    [all my heart, mind, and soul]
    - I always say that if you're going to use commas in the lines then use them correctly. It's a group/list of things which is in calls for commas.

    The poem made me smile. Not at your pain but the fact that you're strong enough to do your job without family and friends, no matter how much it hurts to be away from them. Kudos for that, darling. Lots of kudos.