Comments : The Storm will Pass

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsea Rae

    Very symbolic! I like it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    WOW Nick O.O
    I don't know what to say other then it was beautiful and I loved it! I love storms so much and I could really feel the power of the storm through the poem! O.O It was great =)
    You never cease to amaze me with your work =)
    Keep up the beautiful work Nick because you have a very bright future ahead of you ^.^
    Hugs, Rhea

  • 11 years ago

    by ellewen

    Wow for an 11 year old not bad. but you were a bit repetetive with some words which got annoying fast. But I did like it. It kinda reminds me of one of mine "to stop the rain". kinda sorta. My favorite part of this was :
    "Yet there is a moment of silence, before the thunder sings its song
    And the storm will shake, till it breaks heavens wake."

    keep it up.

    God bless


  • 11 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked how you come up with the nature's amazing
    Good job