WOW Nick O.O
I don't know what to say other then it was beautiful and I loved it! I love storms so much and I could really feel the power of the storm through the poem! O.O It was great =)
You never cease to amaze me with your work =)
Keep up the beautiful work Nick because you have a very bright future ahead of you ^.^
Wow for an 11 year old not bad. but you were a bit repetetive with some words which got annoying fast. But I did like it. It kinda reminds me of one of mine "to stop the rain". kinda sorta. My favorite part of this was :
"Yet there is a moment of silence, before the thunder sings its song
And the storm will shake, till it breaks heavens wake."