Comments : My Troubled Past

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This is a great poem.
    Very well stated.
    Although...
    Maybe you should space out
    The lines a bit more.
    For example:
    The past is the key, to the future I see.
    You could turn that into
    The past is the key
    To the future I see.
    Other than that, well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This is a great poem.
    Very well stated.
    Although...
    Maybe you should space out
    The lines a bit more.
    For example:
    The past is the key, to the future I see.
    You could turn that into
    The past is the key
    To the future I see.
    Other than that, well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow =) 5/5
    Another great one Nick *like always* =D
    Keep up the fantastic work my friend ^.^
    Hugs, Rhea =)

  • 10 years ago

    by ellewen

    YOU GAVE ME A ONE LINER there is no point of commenting if it is going to be a one liner. That is why this is pointless. grr its what you get

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The syllables are somehow not compatible but the wording and flow is good
    I especially liked those

    The past is the key
    To the future I see.

    Keep it up nick