Comments : Exit Soundtrack

  • 11 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    What a dark poem...amnd rather unique! i was captivated within your words! inspiring! great write!! and good choice of words!
    kirsty
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Kevin

    Hmm, interestingly, this poem is about Outer Body Experiences.

  • 11 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    A truly incredible piece of poetry! The words seemed to float off the pages and I was able to take in all of your imagery. The words worked really well together, and I particularly liked this stanza:

    Diving deep with aims to soar,
    perhaps a journey far too far.
    It's coming up from down's the trouble.
    I'm too long from the surface.

    I don't know why, but I enjoyed that part the most.
    Keep it up, and I wouldn't change anything ^_^ 5/5

    Hatori
    <Lonely dreams>

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please RRC one of my poems? Thanks ^.-