Comments : Love or True love

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is pretty true David. Yet one thing i'd have to disagree with is that true love knows the truth, True Love can be very blind. I guess it also depends on the person. The flow was good and the rhyming great. Great job. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good poem David. It had a wonderful flow to it. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    David
    A wonderful view of the diffrences in love and true love. Great job!

    Love is often in the air
    Yet True love owns your heart
    Love always comes together
    Yet True love never falls apart

    I really related to this stanza.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by LostLikeTearsInRain

    Very nice and original,

    "Love keeps you warm at night
    But true love keeps you awake"

    i loved those lines the most

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Love and true love have such a fine line. One is often lost struggling trying to understand exactly where their heart lies. It is a wonder that anyone can sort the difference out without first hand experience.

    You have worded beautifully both sides of the coin. Nice job.

    --Sher

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow oh so very true nice poem i love it i totally agree with you. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Wonderful poem...
    =)

    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Katrina

    WOW!

    I realllly like it.
    its not corny at all & very sweet.

    (^_^)

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Love keeps you warm at night
    Yet True love keeps you awake
    Love is real, what you see
    Yet True love is never fake

    Such powerful words. And you're only 17?
    So very true your words are.
    Excellent

  • 10 years ago

    by moonlil

    So true...Very nice poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gypsy

    Very cleverly written sir, i take my hat off to you!

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    Very beautifully written ,and certainly had me thinking ,maybe there is such a thing as true love.

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Wow... this is a great perception of love and true love. Excellent write. Keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal

    This is wonderful poem david, but also it has alot of flow to it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Denysia

    I think it's a well done poem! i love it lots!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    A true piece of work! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cooper

    Absolutely lovely. A splendid job.

  • 10 years ago

    by mane

    Damn, this one is really good, is this all yours? check my.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good, nice poem. It really defines true love, good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written and sweet love poem....