Comments : Love's a motive

  • 11 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    I liked this poem, it was quite confusing but, i liked the words you used and most sentences were really well put together, gd work hun! i dont unerstnad the low rating, but from me its 5/5!
    nuff luv x

  • 11 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Interesting, confusing you kind of lost me... but the start was good :) i would say 4/5, its good work but not quite excellent.