I didn't tell you

by Vanessa   Apr 15, 2007


On one day, last July
you made me cry
when you said you had to go
I loved you, but I couldn't tell you so

In September, you came back
wondering where I was at
but I had already moved on
all the feelings almost gone

In December you sent me a Christmas card
letting me know you took it hard
when I told you I found another love
It was in the stars above

In April I got your call
telling me how you did fall
for this other girl
it crushed my world

For again I knew you had to go
I loved you, but could not tell you so
I hid my head, and cried in shame
my tears washing away the pain

In June of the next year
it was my worst fear
you were taking her to be your bride
I was terrified

In August 2 years down the road
your love had grown cold
when you caught her with another man
Still i was not there to hand your hand

It is now January, 5 years have went by
the letter I got left tears in my eyes
your dead, your soul had to go
I loved you, but I didn't tell you so

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  • 16 years ago

    by !!*Emmanuelle*!!

    Omg this is soo sad...you know its liek a moral to tell ppl you love them before they leave. ive always had trouble tellign ppl how i feel and al this kinda makes me realize not to coz one day they wont be here anymore 5/5 great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey
    this poen made me go cold all goose bumps....

    i so liked this bit because i know exactly what u meant... all our furtures are in the stars and we cant see them.. sort of thing.....
    "When I told you I found another love
    It was in the stars above!

    really liked it hun..
    5/5
    xhx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Omg sad poem you have written! it brought tears to my eyes.

    you should fix:
    "Still i was not there to hand your hand"
    i think you meant "hold" not hand.

    but yeah wonderful poem about loving someone and hiding it. great job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    When I told you I found another love
    It was in the stars above

    I totally did NOT get those two lines . Some of the rhymes sounded like they were forced, and the flow was kind of rocky . But it wasn`t that bad .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Really loved this poem x

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