Again your peotry is very wel written, it communicates to the reader well i like the way you set out your stanza and some of your vocab is exellent and very appropriate.

xxx alex xxx

Very good poem. In some way I could relate to what was being said.

It's definitely not weird. Take pride in your work - it's good.

Keep it up.

Hey i thought this was really cute, the descriptions are lovely, what you might wanna work on is the rhythem? some of the lines were a bit longer and it didnt flow as well, but other parts were good. Your a good writer =]
~Geo

Hey,

To me this poem was about coming out of the closet literally.I am not sure if that was how you intended it :-)
But it was true, and beautifully written, the rhthym was perfect!
Really welldone, this is fantastic x

Well well well.. I must say I am very impressed with this poem. You did an amazing job on this one. I couldn't pick out one verse that I really liked, because all of them were excellent. You created such a perfect character and I could imagine what she looks like. I hope she's single : P

I, too, think it was a bit weird. But, it was a bit intense, I think is the word I'm looking for. Which made me fall in love with it. :D
Especially:

"Afraid to appear outside the closet
For she feels her feelings hopeless
Oh how hurtful the feeling to know
That her love is more than useless"

Good job, keep it up.

Weird??? never! i have a far better word to describe it: perfect!
it's so beautiful and it flows so well, i could never think it was weird...
(i added the poem to my fav. list, hope you don't mind...)
5/5 ('cause i can't give 10...)

*isabel*

This was beautifully written.
So elegant, and it really hits the reader's nerves hard.
I thought the flow seemed just a tiny bit off on the last line, I think it would go better with ''she'll'' instead of ''she will''
But apart from that, I think you did a magnificent job with this.

Pretty good write. i must say alot of girls minds are unclear, unsure. but that would be a biased statement (; .

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

This confused me at first, but then I finally understood it after reading it again, I really liked it, and it was very well written. I don't think it is that weird, it is a beautiful poem!
Keep up the great work!
SkY

Lvoe sometimes is hard to express out loud but u did it beautifully it was very well written

Diz is prolly da BEST poem ever!