Comments : Sad Love Story

  • 11 years ago

    by isabel

    This is a very interesting emotional piece...
    Quite long, though, as I love to read xD is just the kind of poem i am into =)
    I just find a little bit confusing, yet extremely original, God's part in all of the poem... I find it confusing because I don't seem to understand if God brought you together or helped you when it ended or both... well...poems do tend not to be very objective, so i guess it is for the reader to find it out... ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is written amazingly. I loved it. There is so much emotion in it. Great job. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very deep love poem that certainly seems to have been written from an experience of passion. I liked the contemporary wording mixed with the old wording that cannot seem to be improved upon. In my opinion overall this one is a keeper.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    I enjoyed reading this poem, it had a really good rhythm to it and even though the lines varied, it came together nicely. However, there didn't seem to be much of a story to it, it kept jumping from relationship to God. This didn't affect the outcome.
    You kept repeating words in verses, here:

    Minds are set to think and make
    Especially when you make mistakes

    Just doesn't sound quite right unfortunately. Other than that, great poem, loved the read.

    Peace. Sole x

  • 11 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    This was amazing. I loved it begining to end. The whole story line and flow, was just incredable! Very well written, keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Love the length of the poem and the word choice of every line, it was great you told a story and that story was amazing, truly.

    5/5 david

  • 11 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    This is truely sad, i can feel the pain, the much feelings! Your choice of words really brought out the emotions in this poem! Great job!!

    Keep it up =n= Take care!!

  • 11 years ago

    by KJ

    Another good write! This poem was really true and sort of an eye-opener to every reader i believe. I also love the way your title matched it perfectly. It also showed great emotion

    This started out a sad love story
    Ended up at Gods good glory
    No one can stand in Gods way
    If we stay faithful starting today

    ^^favorite stanza =}

    PrElUdE 2 A KiSs

  • 10 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem makes a good story. It is kind of longer then what I would normally like but you made it work. Everything about it worked out great. Another 5/5