This is a very interesting emotional piece...
Quite long, though, as I love to read xD is just the kind of poem i am into =)
I just find a little bit confusing, yet extremely original, God's part in all of the poem... I find it confusing because I don't seem to understand if God brought you together or helped you when it ended or both... well...poems do tend not to be very objective, so i guess it is for the reader to find it out... ;)
This is a very deep love poem that certainly seems to have been written from an experience of passion. I liked the contemporary wording mixed with the old wording that cannot seem to be improved upon. In my opinion overall this one is a keeper.
I enjoyed reading this poem, it had a really good rhythm to it and even though the lines varied, it came together nicely. However, there didn't seem to be much of a story to it, it kept jumping from relationship to God. This didn't affect the outcome.
You kept repeating words in verses, here:
Minds are set to think and make
Especially when you make mistakes
Just doesn't sound quite right unfortunately. Other than that, great poem, loved the read.