Comments : A blank note: #2

  • 12 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    I lust to be a cloud.
    So meek-
    But so loud

    Don't know what I would do?-
    Maybe take a week off or two.

    that was my favourite part.

  • 11 years ago

    by TearStainedMess

    This poetry is so sad, yet so simple. It explains so much, and yet, doesn't explain enough. Just that you want to be the cloud say so much about you.. Very nicely written.

  • 11 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Oh i love this, it was so short but such a big meaning to it, it feels heavy in my mind. But i just loved it! If i like anymore of your poetry, your going to be one of my fave authors!!


  • 11 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    I liked that one to and i know i wish that could happen some times and take a break from life

  • 11 years ago

    by Angela

    I haven't read all of your poems, but they seems really short. If you made them longer the person reading them would have more time to get the feeling or emotion that you're trying to send.. Though I really liked them:D

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    You sound like a guy at the end of his rope. It realy comes out with such passion. 5/5