Comments : My Four Loves (Quad Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    THose must be some special kids, nice poem 5/5 OUR CLUB RULES.

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What an original idea to write a haiku about each child. I was trying to think of a way to put my kids to verses...this is indeed unique and very beautiful...well done Sher! All the best, debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Naaw this was so sweet. i loved it. i found it excellent and flawless.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write Sherry, full of emotion within short and splender lines of poetry. Wonderful job, keep up the excellent work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful poem. This is so unique. The diffrent personalities of each of your children put in to these lines. Excellent write and very touching.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, a very nice poem with a unique subject, really shows you are a caring person...............
    as always another great poem.

  • I love the poem and you must have GREAT kids

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, excellent flow, nice use of vocabulary, although I dont think it should be in a friendship poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by carissalynn

    That is so sweet of you! Love this!

  • 11 years ago

    by Milo

    Ha this was cute idk why but yeah lol keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is so nice and sweet... Very interesting... Great poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Poetess

    Very sweet poem. Unique and creative...not like a lot of the stuff I've read lately. And i like the idea that it was for your children. May God bless you all! Take care. =]

    ` Liz =]

  • 8 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Sherry..this touched me to the core of my heart.
    A very creative and poetic piece.
    I love the word choice.
    the way you reflected ur love for ur children by the admiration u penned down bout their personalities..

    cant wish but be one of them.