Comments : Kiddy Killers part 2

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Again...oohh my..
    You sure know how to hit the reader's nerve.
    I loved this, I found it to be very intense, hardhitting and heartbreaking at the same time.
    Imagery was beautifully done, flow as always was flawless.
    The ending, I adore.
    Such a beautiful way to wrap up and still such a shocker.

    • 1 year ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you so much for your kind words on this and the first Kiddy Killers

  • 10 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    With these 2 i really liked the first one. Then i read the 2nd and thats definatley my fav! Although the flow at times was a little rocky, only like one or two lines, otherwise it was perfect. they are so emotional and intense. i could see it in my head as i was reading
    Taegan Emily

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my this ripped my heart into pieces. Hey, this one's a real gem, what a heart wrecking message. Ahh this is the sad reality we are in. Your rhyming here was excellent! Added to my faves.

  • 11 months ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Oddly enough, I thought about this poem earlier and was thinking to suggest it. I really like this and the first one, and really enjoyed writing them. Glad you enjoyed it, too. Thank you.