Again...oohh my..
You sure know how to hit the reader's nerve.
I loved this, I found it to be very intense, hardhitting and heartbreaking at the same time.
Imagery was beautifully done, flow as always was flawless.
The ending, I adore.
Such a beautiful way to wrap up and still such a shocker.

With these 2 i really liked the first one. Then i read the 2nd and thats definatley my fav! Although the flow at times was a little rocky, only like one or two lines, otherwise it was perfect. they are so emotional and intense. i could see it in my head as i was reading
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Taegan Emily

Oh my this ripped my heart into pieces. Hey, this one's a real gem, what a heart wrecking message. Ahh this is the sad reality we are in. Your rhyming here was excellent! Added to my faves.

Oddly enough, I thought about this poem earlier and was thinking to suggest it. I really like this and the first one, and really enjoyed writing them. Glad you enjoyed it, too. Thank you.