I like how you rhymed in this poem, even though it was acrostic.
I especially liked the line "See the love that we embrace within our crimson hearts?"
Very nice.

Such a heartfelt poem.
The flow was flawless and the rhyming wasn't forced.

'Kiss me with you soft undying lips I long to endure.
In the mist of it all, the world appears to be secure.
See the love that we embrace within our crimson hearts?
See how I can't live without you; If so, I'd fall apart.'

Beautiful 5/5

[Sarah]

This is a beautiful poem...reminds me alot of my first kiss with my ex-boyfriend..i miss him so much..inf act our first kiss was in the rain...lol...a day I'll never forget

its amazing how the things he will never remeber are the things i will never forget

depressing i know..i guess thats the way life is

5/5 from me
great job...very beautiful!
love always
~shannon~

Wow! that was so good. i enjoyed reading this poem, i love acrostic poems if they're good a lot of the time they took a while to make. the flow on this was really good. and the rhyming was good as well. keep it up :]

btw idk what PM means so im letting you know that im doing this from the thing you posted

This poem is cute. lots of emotion.. very well written.. I used to feel the same way.. My first kiss with my ex was new years at 12. although it was not in the rain.. it was raining outside.. anywho. great poem.. another 5/5

The poem is so...Beautiful....very cute indeed....just loved it!..i love the flow...just very well written!
Kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Awww!!
This poem was so good!
Your really talented!
I loved the two lined stanza
it was really good

Hey,
another great poem, I really like that you made it rhyme even though its a acrostic poem, this poem is definitely my favorite poem for today!

the flow is good and i love the first stanza the most. keep up the good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Breathtaking. 5/5

A very beautiful poem!!

Awwwww.....I like this....

"There you are, standing before my very eyes that gaze.
Here I am, lost into the kiss that put me in that daze.
Everything in your way shines like a diamonds glaze."
It sounds weird and uneven because three rythming words....it doesnt fit.
I just don't like the poem, how its constructed and how it is presented......you have to capture something better like.....the rain droplets.....how they turn into tears when you are not with this person for example....like cause now it sounds to uneven and uncomplete....
please dont take this as an affence im just trying to help.

Great poem good work i love the words in it it gives me goosbumps its a beatiful poem.

Wow, this was so adorable [[= haha cute
Carissa

I love this poem......great job......keep on writting and you shoudl check out some of my poems.......thankx.....and 5/5.....

This poem was beautiful.
You are very talented.
I'd really appreciate if you commented and give me feed back on some of my poems .
Cyaa xxx. def 10/10 =]

Really good poem
5/5

The last line was my favorite out of all of them. It was such a sweet poem. Full of innocence, and grace. The word choices were amazing. I really liked the strong sence of love and passion in this cause its so true how a little kiss can hold sooo much more. Nice work.