Comments : When the clock strikes twelve...

  • 11 years ago

    by xFadedxForeverx

    I can't believe that first person gave you a 4 that was amazing!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by PoeticJustice


  • 11 years ago

    by Miranda HEARTCORE

    Amazing, i believe you should do this one for your school competion, thingy. ;P

  • 11 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was such a powerful piece. The words seemed to flow well together and it read so seamless. Great job all around, I liked the emotion to the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Wow, I love this poem. It is written amazingly. Keep up the great work at writing 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 11 years ago

    by CarolRae

    Wow....that was awesome....really really much very awesome...i think this would be an excellant piece to submit to that competition you mentioned....good job, great's very emotional, and, the way you use your imagination and mind to travel to that world and write something about it is awesome.....

  • Lovely!
    I'm speachless.
    You know you're a good poet, you dont need me to tell you.

  • =) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Absolutely breathtaking. Don't even know what to say.
    5/5 but you deserve more.