I can't believe that first person gave you a 4 that was amazing!!!!
5/5

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing, i believe you should do this one for your school competion, thingy. ;P

This was such a powerful piece. The words seemed to flow well together and it read so seamless. Great job all around, I liked the emotion to the poem.

Wow, I love this poem. It is written amazingly. Keep up the great work at writing 5/5
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Wow....that was awesome....really really much very awesome...i think this would be an excellant piece to submit to that competition you mentioned....good job, great write...it's very emotional, and, the way you use your imagination and mind to travel to that world and write something about it is awesome.....

Lovely!
I'm speachless.
You know you're a good poet, you dont need me to tell you.
;)

=) 5/5

Absolutely breathtaking. Don't even know what to say.
5/5 but you deserve more.